Please give me Feedback on my work

[MightyMouseLBC]

15 HEY, CAN YOU PLEASE CHECK OUT THE PIC THAT I JUST POSTED AND THEN GIVE ME SOME CRITICISM. GOOD OR BAD.

THANX
MIGHTYMOUSELBC

[holly]

YEAH SURE JUST AS SOON AS YOU TELL ME WHERE IT IS POSTED I WILL!!!!!!!

[krezrock]

http://www.bushwood.net/shack/caddy116.JPG

[holly]

Is this the Pic?
http://www.vjcentral.com/_images/member/CaptainIrelandfinished.jpg

[MightyMouseLBC]

Yah that's the pic. I made it from scratch. Except for the face ( mouth nose and eyes) I incorporated some of that from an old "Action Comics" cover.

[vjrei]

Nice coloring, lighting and shadows, but ?where is the right arm?

The gradient in the sholder (from white to green) looks better than on his face. I mean, looks like it got burn a bit, specially in the fronthead, just a tiny bit too much.

But it is very nice.

[InfraRed]

You should give him a 4 leaf shamrock emblem on his shield !

Or a pint of Guinness.

Good image - probably look at putting some worn maps (like photos of old metal) over his shield as if he has seen a few fights and some dynamic sweeping graphic behind him with a big light gradient. That would top it off.

adios

N

[bluntfaktory]

it's slick , have you ever done club flyers or parties . i once saw a Demitry from Praise flyer were he was done as a super hero . what are the captains powers ? hay here's a good catch faze for him :[ in the words of Kermit the frog "it's not easy being green" . ] and when he figures things out he could say " by shamrock , i think we have a chance !" seriousely though , it's cool and looks really well finished . :yep:

[MightyMouseLBC]

Thanks for all the great feed back. Keep it coming though, I strive for perfection and your suggestions expand my creative spark, so far they have inspired me to try other things with this and other Captain Ireland pics. Check back for the "!Next adventure of Captain Ireland!" (I crack myself up).

Thanks Again.

MightyMouseLBC (Matt) :D

[MightyMouseLBC]

I through this website together in about 3 minutes but it serves its purpose.

It's http://www.captainireland.8m.com/CaptainIrelandhome.html so go their if you want to see some other stuff.

[holly]

Hmmm. A whole house full of "super soldiers" somewhere in New York City...? Where is this Avengers' Mansion?

Cap'n Ireland + Cap'n America....
I'm writing slash fiction even as we speak.

[hamageddon]

what's that? marvel superhero franchise?
any chance of seeing kapit?n deutschland, captian iraque
or captain afghanistan soon?
:rolleyes:

btw:
http://www.underbridge.com/scathan/archive/1995/11_november/11.11.comics.html

but talking of the irish: i always liked banshee, but siryn was
a complete waste of time